[SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

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[SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  Tomiya on Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:06 am

Hello everyone! Check out my new covers of B1A4 - O.K, U-KISS - Someday and Infinite - Be mine! Its all acoustic just for you!! Thank you very much! ^__^ v


B1A4 - O.K cover


U-KISS - Someday


INFINITE - Be Mine
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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  YouJuChan on Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:19 am

pfft youuu!!! WHY ARE YOU SO FREAKIN' AWESOME?! XDD;

OK - perfect live cover... just P.E.R.F.E.C.T.! I really loved your rap and just the power you put in singing this! Totally made me dance!
Maybe one thing I noticed was how you kinda 'hold' back your voice when singing the 'louder' notes, but I think its pretty difficult with the breathing in this song anyways lol but yeah it kinda sounds like it won't be healthy for your throat T_T

Someday - Another awesome cover! T_T Since this is a live cover it's really difficult to not have some off notes but other than that I don't really have lots to say but, .... guh I envy you so much for being able to play guitar *sobs*

Be Mine - My comments for every song get shorter ... lol ... Anyways.. The rap! Really well done imo! The headvoiced parts were a liiiittle off, maybe here it would've been better to take a short breath and just let the note out or so but I don't know if I wouldve done it otherwise in a live cover lol All in all I enjoyed it! Well I enjoy every cover you make so *biased* XD

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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  SitD on Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:39 am

I listened to your 3 covers last night.
As always I really like your singing+guitar combo *^*
But honestly I think you have done better in the past. I feel you 'strained' your voice too much, it sounds kinda... erm 'scrunched up'. Get what I'm saying?
Don't get me wrong, these 3 covers were still good and each time you set the songs to your hand. It's just that I know you can sound different and less strainy.

Anyways, Be Mine was my fave *^* The rap was so cool, and that higher "ha-ja~~" in the chorus sounded really nice.
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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  Tomiya on Wed Sep 21, 2011 7:32 am

@YouJuChan - Thank you very much! :D And thank you for the advices! I will try to improve in future! :D

@SitD - Thank you very much! ^_^ Oh I really dont get what you want to say about singing like this! LoL! haha! Maybe some better explanation so I can fix it? Thank you! ^_^v
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Post  SitD on Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:27 am

Mmm let's see if I can explain it in a different way :3 I lack a lot of technical terms so it's gonna be normal language :p

What I mean by 'straining' your voice is putting too much pressure on your vocal cords while singing. Sometimes you use too much force in your throat to get the sound out.
For example in your OK cover, at 0:13 "Come closer baby" It sounds really forced. There's a higher note in 'closer' (you go higher from 'come' to 'closer'). It might be because it's a bit difficult for you to reach that note (?) that you try to compensate by singing it harder (thus, putting extra strain in your throat).
The same thing happens at 0:40. The "Wae" could sound a lot more ... erm... opener... looser.... more flowy. But it you sing it tight and short.

An Example in your Someday cover: at 0.33 the "molla" and a little bit the entire verse that comes after that. It's like you tense up your voice and let it all out in the "ippeunya~" at 0.47 (I don't know what the lyrics are XD just transcribing what I hear). You do hear that in "ippeunya" your voice sounds a lot softer and flowy than the lines before that, no?

I hope I could make you understand what I mean with 'scrunching up your voice' ^^; It's not necessarily a bad thing, because well... sometimes songs just are like that. And I think you do that to your voice mostly at higher parts of a song, like when the pitch glides up.
I wouldn't really know specifically how you could improve that tho ^^; Because most of your covers do sound really nice and flowy. Maybe listen to yourself more and go "hey, this is where I sound soft and this is where I sound strained, why do I sing it differently?" lol idk XD I'm not a very good singer myself so I can't give you any solid advice, I just go by with what I hear :3

okay I hope this made sense to you cuz I really wouldn't know how to say it differently XD
also don't take this as an offense or anything, I really don't mean anything bad by it
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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  Almighty Cho on Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:52 am

*didn't comment because I would loose myself in fangirling over Tomiya*XD

From what I hear what Stef criticized, I agree that you are tightening your throat, either because you are unconsiously scared of the high notes before you OR because exactly that note is like a "hole" in your voice.. I have those "dead points" in my voice, I learned in my vocal lessons that it's good to practice the lines a little different.. Like.. you start 1 note HIGHER than the actual high note you wanna sing and slide down to the note you wanna sing, but stay relaxed. Cause I know you already sang higher than that note and it sounded good, so while practicing try to start the high notes even higher until you can sing the original note in a relaxed feeling ^^
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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  Tomiya on Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:28 am

@SitD - Thank you very much! I will try to improve! ^__^v

@Almighty Cho - Thank you very much! I will try to do better in future! :D
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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  xKeirafanx on Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:42 am

Not going to repeat what Stef and Miri said, just letting you know that I chime in there.

My favorite out of the three was definitely OK. You had the perfect power and spirit for the song, I also like that you sang Sandeul's adlib rather than the chorus.
Someday was good too, but I wish you had a little something more...sparking through the whole thing. As for Be Mine *points at Miri&Stef comments*

Very very OT, but my two lovely flatmates came in while I was watching/listening to OK and they said you're very handsome, hot and cute at the some time. Coming from someone as critical as them they are unbearable you should definitely take that as a compliment xDD
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Re: [SOLO] B1A4,U-KISS,Infinite Tomiya acoustic live covers

Post  Tomiya on Fri Sep 30, 2011 6:36 am

Hahahah! Awsome! Thank you for the great comments! I will try to do it better from now on! :D
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