Mrhellofai - Lone Rider ( my original song ! )

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Mrhellofai - Lone Rider ( my original song ! )

Post  mrhellofai on Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:46 pm



ello guys ! this is my first original song ! tell me how is it !

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Re: Mrhellofai - Lone Rider ( my original song ! )

Post  Almighty Cho on Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:23 am

Oversaw this topic *coughs* sorry~

*listens*
I dunno who you are, so~ xD
The white-shirt-guy seems unsure at some notes, like he sang them a bit un-clear (sliding off too much a bit at some parts), the song itself is really relaxing me (maybe cause i love acoustic versions XD).
The black-shirt-guy is a bit more sure at his singing notes ^^
The chorus with the harmony sounds really fitting *.* You 2 blend very well :)
I like the song :3
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Re: Mrhellofai - Lone Rider ( my original song ! )

Post  xKeirafanx on Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:14 am

I've listened to the song quite a couple of times, I really love the "Hotel California" - singer-songwriter feeling of it. It's a nice composition for a beginner and the text is really nice too.
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