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[PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Firefly on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:37 am



Steffy's first PP is out!! Congratz to all the participants on the great outcome!

Coded Lyrics (v2)
Links removed due to ToS

Team Break Up
TOP - Angelnaykka22
Daesung - Bbung
GD - Sagacchi
Taeyang - SitD
Seungri - xKeirafanx
Mixer: Sagacchi

[color=darkblue]Team Miss You[color]
TOP - Hanipazui
Daesung - Firefly
GD - Neorago (Rap - SitD)
Taeyang - Joongieloveforever
Seungri - YouJuChan
Mixer: Firefly

Team Forget You
TOP -Bbung
Daesung - Yukidama
GD - Hanipazui
Taeyang - Youjuchan
Seungri - Casali
Mixer: SitD
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Firefly on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:40 am

Yay it's out! XD Sorry for my terrible mix, if someone has something they want to see changed, I'm willing to remix! Also, for some weird reason my laptop doesn't allow me to change the tags, will see if I can fix that when I'm on my comp again..
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Sagacchi on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:41 am

maybe you had the file opened with .. like windows media player ^^ ?




yay its ouuut gonna listen to the other 2 teams now!


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i will add sooome comments after my exams ok? T w T

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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Firefly on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:46 am

Nopes I went to properties etc.. I can see everything but not change it, it's weird T_T
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Sagacchi on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:48 am

strange.. i mean to me that only happens when i have the file open with a progam :/ hmmm.

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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  xKeirafanx on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:50 am

Yay, OMG it's a release.
Waiting for Ani's pointers.
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Firefly on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:55 am

Oh it works now! Lol thanks Ani<3
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Neorago on Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:00 am

OMG IT GOT RELEASED *_________*

/goes to listen
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Almighty Cho on Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:23 am

Release! *O*
Congratz to Stef :33
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  SitD on Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:47 am

Misses PP-holder has got some complicated feelings to express, check under the spoiler!!
Spoiler:

OH EM GEE!!!
My first PP is OUT!!

Let's have a small moment of celebration~



And take the time to thank each and everyone who participated and mixed!!


Now let’s get to the comments :D

TEAM BREAK UP

TOP - Angelnaykka22
I adore your rap!! So effing delicious, I can’t even *-* Like OMG!! So.Amazing.


Daesung - Bbung
You gave Daesung an entire different spin, and it sounds so good. You sang in a less direct-powerful voice, but overloaded with emotion which gave it still a powerful impact. Beautiful. I have no more words.

GD - Sagacchi
Ah what can I say… You are the SD master after all. I think you nailed his parts, I even sneaked up on your files to record the missing rap for Neorago to see how it’s done. You stayed very soft and vulnerable during the quieter parts of the song, and during the rap you showed attitude. Not a badass attitude, because that is not at all the feeling of this song, but a very fitting one, kinda slick.

Taeyang - SitD
I had a loooot of doubts about myself in this song. Saga knows all about it >o<
I think I sound very harsh and strained, and kinda on the surface. And I HATE the way I did the ‘nan ooh ooh’. I do like the final adlibs ^^

Seungri – xKeirafanx
I know you’re already tired of hearing, but… a very soft Seungri /runs
Keke, but it’s not a bad thing at all. You sound very smooth throughout the song, and I love the ‘nan ooh ooh ooh’ you did. It’s only a few words, but you make them sound so beautiful.

Mixer: Sagacchi
A very good mixing job! The way you mixed TOP’s intro is outstanding, sounds verrrry good.


TEAM MISS YOU

TOP – Hanipazui
O_O I almost fell off my chair when I heard the intro. I was like: wtf was that? XD;
I don’t want to make you feel bad, it’s just that I don’t like the ‘low-ness’ -that- much. I know you’re kickass good at doing a low and hairy TOP, but here I think it’s a tiny bit too much >.<
The rap you did, on the other hand, was spot on! 8D Sounded just the way it should. And OMG you did that whispery line just the way I wanted it to sound!! ^o^

Daesung – Firefly
I told you already, but I think you really did a great Daesung. So much power and emotions, and I loooove that little crack in your voice <3

GD - Neorago (Rap - SitD)
It was really too bad you didn’t manage the rap :/ If you look at it, it’s not the most difficult rap out there, but I know you tried so no biggie. You sound a little lifeless during the ‘I hate this love song’ lines. The quality of your mic makes it hard to judge your singing ^^; but overall I think you did adequately.

Taeyang – Joongieloveforever
At times you sound kinda… how do I put it… shock-ish? Like, you cut off certain syllables instead of making it a fluent line. The way you did the lines in TOP’s part sound a little bit too harsh for me, lacks some kind of softness. Other than that, you really managed to put emotion into your lines. Especially in the ‘I hate this love song’ part, I believe you! Why do you hate it? T_T XD;

Seungri – YouJuChan
Daaw x3 You couldn’t sound any lovelier. Your melodic voice suits Seungri’s lines very much. I don’t have any critique. Love the way you did the ‘nan ooh ooh’ :D lol seems that everyone just did those a lot better than I did XD;

Mixer: Firefly
You said you were waiting for pointers to change the mix, so I’m giving them to you, don’t feel attacked >.< I just want to help you make it better. I’ve got a quite a few recommendations, most is about the unbalance between the volumes of the main vocals, and also the volumes of the harmonies/back ground sounds.

Check under the spoiler for mixing pointers~
Spoiler:
Cyn sounds too far in the background compared to Bigi. And the same goes for Neorago. I know the quality of the mics is mostly to blame for that, but if you turn down Bigi a bit that would be better already.

The harmonies on GD lines is a bit too strong, maybe turn up Neorago’s main vocal up there. Because it sounds as if two people are singing, and it’s only supposed to be a supporting voice. And the ‘echo’ of that line is too loud. It’s too much of a contrast between the lines before it.

The whispery line of TOP is too dominating over the main lines of TOP and Taeyang.

The BG sounds and harmonies on GD’s rap are also too loud, they can def be turned down a few db’s.
Especially the high harmonies ‘kyo’ , ‘sho’ and the high harmonies on those semi-singing lines. Way too loud.

Again Cyn’s volumes, after GD’s rap she sounds too far in the background. Or turn down the rap, or turn up Cyn.

Final pointer, the instrumental could be up a notch or two.

BUT you also did things well! ^^ Timing fits, and the intro sounds great mixing-wise.

TEAM FORGET YOU

I have the tendency to like the team I mixed more than the other teams. I’m fully aware of that and I do my best not show any bias. So I’ll try my hardest to give objective comments… sry >.<

TOP -Bbung
I loved your intro, sounds very sad and soft but not weak. Also you delivered the rap lines perfectly. I already told you how much I love them ne ;)

{for clarification, I did the last line in TOP’s rap because Bbung had troubles reaching that low, we discussed it and thought it was the best solution}

Daesung - Yukidama
Omo, I like your Daesung so much! Just like Tammy’s! So very beautiful and full of emotions. You had a slightly more sadder approach, which totally fits since it’s a sad song.

GD - Hanipazui
Very good GD. I’m glad I was able to drag you in my pp and that you were able to send in your parts (after all that trouble you had with recording). *two thumbs up* I enjoyed!

Taeyang - Youjuchan
/copy past comment about your Seungri/
Your adlib-ish lines at the end of the song are beautiful., so melodic… *sigh*

Seungri – Casali
I know you worried about your parts a lot, but there’s no reason to ^^ You don’t sound screamy, and you follow the flow of the song nicely. All and all, you fitted your part of Seungri very well.

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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  YouJuChan on Sat Jun 25, 2011 8:53 am

Release *^* Have I mentioned already how I love the Word 'Release'? <3

N'awww thanks stef for the lovely comment <3 I had so much fun singing this *^*
Comment will hopefully follow soon :D

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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Yukidama on Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:52 pm

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaays it's ouuuuuuut! I will hopefully be back soon with a long, long comment x3~

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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Bbung on Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:01 am

OOOOOHH A RELEASE
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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  Sagacchi on Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:13 am

only commenting on my team here sorry >.< but actually think, all teams are equal , despite differences!


Team Break Up

TOP - Angelnaykka22 - IM SORRY i think i over-echoed ur beginning -.- hmm maybe not over echoed, but they should have been more quiet.. sorry :/ but ur parts were nice! the rap was really nicey nicey, but some parts were to low to you of course XD i mean its TOP ahaha. it would be unfair to critizise those parts <3
Daesung - Bbung - def not similar to daesung .. but hey who cares! I LOVE HOW YOU SOUND HERE! i love ur pronounciation of "i know~~" it has a australian accent LOL
GD - Sagacchi - did someone hear/like that in the first "i hate this love song i hate this love song etc" i was singing calmly in the beginning, and in the next four lines i used more power?
Taeyang - SitD - UHM I STILL DONT THINK THERES ANYTHING TO CHANGE OR REPLACE ^^ i love how your voice is similar to Taeyang during the "i hate this love song" lines !!!
Seungri - xKeirafanx - GOSH i really should have pointed out the pronounciation earlier, because now i totally forgot everything i wanted to say D: but what bugs me the most was the pronounciation of the word "oeropji" .. you said "Eroptschi" but oe is mostly pronounced as "we" and if "p" and "j" come together, it mostly sounds better to drop the p while pronouncing! so its "weroji" in the end - thats also what they sing :) .. im sorry i cant point out anything else now, i just totally forgot everything -_-;

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Re: [PP 143] Big Bang - Love Song

Post  SitD on Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:22 am

Sagacchi wrote:GD - Sagacchi - did someone hear/like that in the first "i hate this love song i hate this love song etc" i was singing calmly in the beginning, and in the next four lines i used more power?
I noticed!! Although I might not have expressed it fully in that sentence? But I did notice!! I liked it :D
SitD wrote:You stayed very soft and vulnerable during the quieter parts of the song, and during the rap you showed attitude.
Sagacchi wrote:Taeyang - SitD - UHM I STILL DONT THINK THERES ANYTHING TO CHANGE OR REPLACE ^^ i love how your voice is similar to Taeyang during the "i hate this love song" lines !!!
Keke okay~ ;3 Thank you!



Almighty Cho wrote:Release! *O*
Congratz to Stef :33
Yaaay~ thank you Cho ^3^



hoping for more comments of you guys .... I mean, this project isn't that bad right? Is it? T_T
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